Tips for Writing Effective Candidate Rejection Letters
July 27th, 2010Even though most people understand that applying for a job is “business,” and therefore any rejection isn’t personal, it’s still stings a bit to receive a rejection letter, especially if the candidate really wanted the position.
In fact, what really stings applicants is receiving a form rejection letter. Here are some tips to write more personal candidate rejection letters.
First, start with a buffer, of sorts. This should be short and have a small bit of praise, such as “Thank you for applying for our executive assistant position. We appreciate that you thought enough of our company to send in your resume.”
Your next paragraph should tell the applicant why you’re making this decision. Provide a few details: “The position requires at least 10 years of senior administrative experience.”
Then segue to the bad news. Don’t put this in a separate paragraph; that just draws attention to the negativity. For example, “This position requires at least 10 years of senior administrative experience and the position has been filled it with someone who meets that criteria.”
Notice how you didn’t say anything at all about the rejected candidate’s lack of experience. It’s implied, however, and is done in an indirect and more tactful manner.
In fact, your next sentence could be something like this: “We will be keeping your resume on file should you wish to apply for a different position.”
Aim to never use words such as “unfortunately,” “regret,” etc. Very gloomy.
Your close should be positive: “We wish you much success in your job search.”
Candidates who interviewed but not chosen should always receive a phone call from the hiring manager. Always. After all, candidates took the time from their schedules to meet with your managers, perhaps traveling several times for different interviews. The hiring manager can at least take a few moments to call all interviewees and let them know someone else was hired. It’s the professional and courteous thing to do.
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